Caring for children is very important for our society therefore all mother and father should take a childcare training course to what extent do you agree or disagree?
In today's modernization,the lifestyle of people have been greatly affected.However,some isuues remain unchallenged and as cpmplex as ever.One such issue here is of carring for children is very part of parcel for our society and family should take a child care training course and i agree this statement not only but also,I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shade up my opinion by end
On one side,there is a group of people who believe that parents should take a child care training course.Children caring is very important for our society.They is very beneficial children care training course.It course provide discipline,co-operation,devotion.In modern era,mother and father they should provide good education and parent is responsible for the children because parents can love the child in spite of child also love parents.
Secondly,Parents is important for children.Parents is good advicer and they caring very much although it is good for me advice in future.Some people are also prefer child care training course in my country.It is great interest in it.It tooks great interest in it.
In conclusion,weighing the options,I believe that there is no single conclusion still.I take this ground that an effective clap requires both use of hands parents careing is very incumbent role in life all people are prefer the child care traning course and it is good and great intrest in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, in conclusion, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1185.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29017857143 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.73117885277 2.80592935109 133% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558035714286 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 74.0 20.2975951904 365% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 266.154090707 49.4020404114 539% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 395.0 106.682146367 370% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 74.6666666667 20.7667163134 360% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 26.3333333333 7.06120827912 373% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 28.0 5.01903807615 558% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.32739596933 0.244688304435 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.206160630033 0.084324248473 244% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0984722460965 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.199208532128 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653498436289 0.056905535591 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -12.09 50.2224549098 -24% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.3 11.3001002004 295% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.59 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.04 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 59.0 9.78957915832 603% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.6 10.1190380762 312% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 59.0 10.7795591182 547% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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