Nowadays, fast food more and more popular. we can see fast food store in anywhere. There are several reason why fast food become popular.
First of all, it's convenient. we realize that people are becoming more busy , it seems that everyone don’t have enough time to prepare their own meals. To save the cooking time, fast food is the best choice for each of other. Secondly, fast foods taste better and cheaper. It is definitely faster and efficient which should can suit the lifestyle of morden person.
However, there is getting to be more and more evidence that fast food is bad for people. Eating fast foods can bring about so many different types of sickness such as high cholesterol level, diabetes and obesity upon us. Fast food can also replace some healthy eating habits , this change can easily lead to sickness. Besides, If we eat to much, it can lack of essential nutrients for body.
In conclusion, there are some cause and effect fast food on human life. Although fast food also brings some convenient for this busy life, eating at fast foods also brings some effect on human as it is harmful to human health. Therefore, people should avoid eating at fast foods for the sake of health.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 993.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 210.0 315.596192385 67% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72857142857 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.80675409584 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.17821894479 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580952380952 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 308.7 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.907496807 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.2 106.682146367 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.93333333333 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.463034284967 0.244688304435 189% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.17700841916 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.145875589796 0.0667982634062 218% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287403194444 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113281263504 0.056905535591 199% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.8 13.0946893788 60% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.56 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.34 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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