Causes, effects and solutions of shyness
It is said that the increasing rate of shyness people is a dangerous issue in recent years. As shyness is so prevalent in the world, it is not surprising that social scientists are learning more about it. In this essay, I intend to explore the source causes of this phenomenon and its affections along with some possible solutions.
Chief among the causes of this problem is a family structure as family is a place where a child grows up, and it also has a big impact on each individual in field of characteristic. A method used to train children has played a major role. Should individual be brought up by single-parent homes, they absolutely will get less concern than their other friends. Thus, in long-term, less confidence, and social-isolation are these problems that they have to deal with. Besides, living with hectic parents spending their whole time at work is a potential factor. Those who have not enough time to take their children to visit grandparents, socialize with neighbours or friends, which lead in to lack of social skills then they begin to feel timidly, and inhibited.
One of the most critical influences of shyness is lack of soft skills. The shy is frequently being shaky and realize too difficult to express a meaningful sentence. In addition, it appears that they fear of standing in crowed-place, which is a disadvantage while having an interview in order to apply a new job. Also, because of less interaction with public, people being blushing have a few friends; thus, they are risk of illness namely depression, and autism.
Fortunately, there are things that can be done to resolve this issue. Firstly, people should join some outdoor activities such as attending clubs, volunteer work, and camping so that they stay optimistic. Secondly, a healthy lifestyle is a appropriate measure. Try to do exercise every day, having a balance diet, and cut down time on computer’s screen. These solutions not only prevent people from shyness but also help them stay away from another problems as heart disease or high blood pressure.
To sum up, although shyness being a psychology sickness has a harmful impact on patients’s life, everyone can apply some measures to keep positive attitude, and improve health in order to defend themselves. (379 words)
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... brought up by single-parent homes, they absolutely will get less concern than th...
^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...istic. Secondly, a healthy lifestyle is a appropriate measure. Try to do exercise...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01312335958 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8119926966 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2113807975 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.526315789 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11490870425 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291326157219 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420979874541 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646339211307 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414846126254 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... brought up by single-parent homes, they absolutely will get less concern than th...
^^
Line 7, column 239, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...istic. Secondly, a healthy lifestyle is a appropriate measure. Try to do exercise...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, thus, while, in addition, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1910.0 1615.20841683 118% => OK
No of words: 381.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01312335958 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41805628031 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8119926966 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 237.0 176.041082164 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 578.7 506.74238477 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2113807975 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.526315789 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0526315789 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.89473684211 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.11490870425 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0291326157219 0.084324248473 35% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420979874541 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646339211307 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0414846126254 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.