Childhood obesity is becoming a problem throughout the developed world. Because of this, some people think that adverts for fast food, sweet and sugary snacks should not be allowed in schools and colleges. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this.
It is universally accepted that in today's modern world childhood fatness is a controversial dilemma. So, some individuals reckon that advertisements for fast food, sugary snacks and sweet which aim at children should not be permitted. This essay intends to discuss both agreeable and disagreeable points of view.
To begin with, adverts play an important role in any country's industry by making sales opportunities easier to achieve. Since children are more susceptible to these kinds of interactions, ads tend to aim at them. Consequently, kids keep buying different things they see in ads which consist of fast food, sugary snacks and sweets which, in turn, inflict their obesity levels in an adverse way.
Moreover, these types of products are extremely harmful to the children's health conditions. By this I mean that they can undermine there brain activity and their abilities to think, to count or to solve the exercises. As a result, they might not be active in the year classes. In my family, for example, my little brother is not allowed to eat fast food at school by my parents and they provide him with a hand-made meal every day due to the fact that fast food might contain hazardous ingredients.
On the other hand, most people hugely rely on fast food in a daily basis due to the fact that they have less time to prepare a meal. And most people are in turn in most crowded sites like schools, colleges and universities. So, advertising in such places can give advertisers more benefits than in empty places. As a consequence, their makes are more sold in these sites.
Taking everything into consideration, children are ready to purchase sings in ads whenever they watch regardless of their harmful effects on their health. However, advertising in schools can give more opportunities to sell the products owing to the great number of people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 376, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an adverse way" with adverb for "adverse"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
..., in turn, inflict their obesity levels in an adverse way. Moreover, these types of products a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, moreover, so, for example, i mean, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1555.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98397435897 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76747740967 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0427145145 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1875 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.6875 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215780172727 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575261754392 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0592081579025 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112913197367 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0813777732686 0.056905535591 143% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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