Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it's important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
The vast majority of people reckon that by permitting the children to decide on the options of their daily issues, we will certainly make our younger generation selfish humans who just think only about their desires. However, others believe that we have to make the offsprings free to make decisions relating to lives. This essay intends to have a look at both sides of the view and give my own perspective.
To begin with, it is true that today's children endeavour to be independent from their parents a bit earlier than those of the past. Not thinking about their parents' abilities, they want to buy food and closes and make their entertaining activities not depending on the parents. As a result, it is irrefutable that they may get to the point of even controlling over their parents and ignoring their all kinds of wishes. In the USA, for example, the youngsters become independent from their parents after finishing high schools and they tend to leave their parents alone as their parents have done. This process goes on thanks to the lenient fathers and mothers.
On the other hand, from others' perspectives, we should put them in freedom despite the fact that they become selfish and dogmatic. The reason for this is that the life belongs to the young, so they are, in turn, of paramount importance in making decisions. Although it's undeniable that they might encounter ample obstacles in their early ages, they ought to learn about their lives. Consequently, they will become a strong and powerful individual of the society. Their living conditions and their abilities they may have in the future really rely on their early thinking of themselves.
To my way of thinking, it is the parents who are vital dominants in making decisions for the young generation. That is to say, parents never give their kids the wrong thing that is why the kids have to depend on their parents opinions. So, they will become neither selfish nor the strongest individuals. Let us take Uzbekistan as an example, there parents control their children up until they are ready to an adult life.
Taking everything into consideration, while some children are getting selfish as a result of having anything they want, others are likely to be meaningful persons if they do decide on themselves. However, I strongly opine that parents play a main role in the children's decision-making positions.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, however, if, look, may, really, so, while, for example, as a result, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 59.0 24.0651302605 245% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1977.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90570719603 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57818168351 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 218.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54094292804 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 600.3 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9375521058 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.052631579 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2105263158 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.52631578947 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272572778986 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828264559667 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0598982349317 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153957876943 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0588711846899 0.056905535591 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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