Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters (such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
The issue of children decision has been brought into focus recently. Some people think that parents need to permit children make their choices on many little matters beacuse it will good for their future life while it is considered by other that it is significant for children to make dicisions about something can effect themselves. In my opinion, I think children can make decision on small things and something important need to ask their parents' suggestion.
On the one hand, there are many advantages that children make decision by themselves on daily matters. Firstly, making decision by children can benefit their future life. This is becuase children will meet different situation everyday, if they choose in their childhood, they have more experience when they meet the same situations, which means that when they meet difficulties, they may have a good selection and decrease some danger risks. Secondly, it can help them cultivate their opinion. Many children have chance to choose what they eat, what they wear and which games they play, it can help children to make their own life style and have their own opinions. For example, many pop stars' children have good taste in fashion in their childhood and become fashion models and dressing style in the future. Finally, it can improve children self-esteem or self-efficacy. Many children can choose things that they want, which can let them believe that they have ability to change the life they live and have confidence to overcome problems.
On the other hand, someting which can effect children future ought to ask parents advices. First of all, parents have more life experience who will have better eyesight to make a better decision. Children are young, they can not observe something very clearly because of their age. Meanwhile, children can do some implusive decision because their development. Many children' brain do not have a great development, they can not control their emotion when they meet some difficult issues, which means that they will do the wrong or implusive decisions about matters that affect them, which can influence their future life. For example, some children maybe meet the major choose when they go to the colleges, in this period, they can choose the subjects by themselves. However, it is better to ask parents advices. This is because many parents who know the need of the labor market, which can help their children choose a good major that can earn money in the future or find a good job.
In conclusion, children have their choice on something small in daily life while something can influence their life need to seek for parents advices.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... children will meet different situation everyday, if they choose in their childhood, the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 7.85571142285 344% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04566210046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41752254469 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408675799087 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3729478668 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205929351422 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811489404869 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581874764513 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155462862643 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563520384378 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 227, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... children will meet different situation everyday, if they choose in their childhood, the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, i think, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 27.0 7.85571142285 344% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 60.0 24.0651302605 249% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2210.0 1615.20841683 137% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04566210046 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41752254469 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.408675799087 0.561755894193 73% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 665.1 506.74238477 131% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.3729478668 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.5 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.9 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.75 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205929351422 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0811489404869 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581874764513 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155462862643 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0563520384378 0.056905535591 99% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.