Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?
Children’s corpulence has become a worrying issue among the communities in recent years. There are many reasons that leading them to this problem.
There are several reasons that caused the increasing levels of childhood obesity. First, nowadays eating habits have altered by increasing the fast-food companies and many of children tending to consume valueless materials which include high calories, oil, sugar, and salty than that previous generation. Second, one of the critical problems that can observe and also parents should have considered is their children’s motionless. Most children are willing to do seated activities during the day such as playing computer games, browsing the internet, and watching TV. Therefore, these actions lead to rising in obesity in the early age of childhood.
There are many ways and actions that could be taken to mortify these problems to the lowest rate in childhood which is mentioned above. One of the best prescriptions that parents are able to do is adjusting daily foodstuffs. For instance, they can adopt their children to eat healthy foods such as vegetables, proteins and also consuming fast-foods once a month as a gift if they promise to abide by it. In addition, encouraging the children to do activities that lead them to have healthy physical. Moreover, if parents restrict the time for the children for doing passive things it can be lead to reduce obesity levels eventually.
To conclude, there are diverse factors leading to the increase the obesity in childhood and results showed us that it should overcome this problem.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, second, so, therefore, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1340.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27559055118 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70662347799 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574803149606 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 407.7 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6557268317 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.076923077 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5384615385 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197911926315 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0768492572997 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.073795414015 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142741940843 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540539266396 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.3 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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