Childhood obesity has become a serious problem in recent years. What are the primary causes of this? What measures should be taken to reduce childhood obesity?
It is a contemporary issue that the youngers are affected by fat in their early stages. This essay will look in deep the core facts for this reason and come with some important solutions to minimise the situation.
The modern world has become more competitive with socio- economic changes than ever, caused the both parents to work full time, in order to be sustained with cost of living. This leads the parents to search easy ways to feed their kids with their limited time at home. For example, fast food has become more popular among children both at their dining table and school bags, where parents does not need to worry taking time for cooking. Second, the new technology has put the youth into abyss by its heavy attracted affects. Computers and mobile phones are on the top which bring the child’s activities into a one place, influencing that the kids could do any sports or adventures, sitting on one place, moving fingers on curser, looking at the visuals and sounds, similar to outside environment. The social medias are available anytime to connect with loved ones in a second, avoiding visit them face to face. This direct the younger ones to do any real activities or event which is an important to burn the calories to avoid from fatty livers.
It is positive, that many developed counties, now has come up with new strategies to limit the younger generation from this disaster. ‘No mobile phones at school’ is yet to implemented in primary schools. The governments can instruct the media and social networks to eliminate fast food advertisements with attracted elements to the early ages, such as heroes or stars. Further the government could reserve more funds on family welfare, to keep one parent at home, rather than building new hospitals for obesity and correlated diseases, such as, cancer.
In nut shell, obesity is traumatic but evitable with proper guidelines to the public. The governments and health organisation should take necessary steps before it worsen, which could show a less efficient labour force in future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orsen, which could show a less efficient labour force in future.
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Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...uld show a less efficient labour force in future.
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...less efficient labour force in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, second, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1719.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 345.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98260869565 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3097767484 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49686213494 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620289855072 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.2188101102 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.6 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.86666666667 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0764531606305 0.244688304435 31% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.025652950576 0.084324248473 30% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0230503221803 0.0667982634062 35% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494619492599 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00891203980549 0.056905535591 16% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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