It is a contemporary issue that the youngers are affected by fat in their early stages. This essay will look in deep the core facts for this reason and come with some important solutions to minimize the situation.
The modern world has become more competitive with socio- economic changes than ever, caused the both parents to work full time, in order to be sustained with cost of living. This leads the parents to search easy ways to feed their kids with their limited time at home. For example, fast food has become more popular among children both at their dining table and school bags, where parents does not need to worry taking time for cooking. Second, the new technology has put the youth into abyss by its heavy attracted affects. Computers and mobile phones are on the top which bring the child’s activities into a one place, influencing that the kids could do any sports or adventures, sitting on one place, moving fingers on curser, looking at the visuals and sounds, similar to outside environment. The social medias are available anytime to connect with loved ones in a second, avoiding visit them face to face. This direct the younger ones to do any real activities or event which is an important to burn the calories to avoid from fatty livers.
It is positive, that many developed counties, now has come up with new strategies to limit the younger generation from this disaster. ‘No mobile phones at school’ is yet to implemented in primary schools. The governments can instruct the media and social networks to eliminate fast food advertisements with attracted elements to the early ages, such as heroes or stars. Further the government could reserve more funds on family welfare, to keep one parent at home, rather than building new hospitals for obesity and correlated diseases, such as, cancer.
In nut shell, obesity is traumatic but evitable with proper guidelines to the public. The governments and health organisation should take necessary steps before it worsen, which could show a less efficient labour force in future.
- In the past most people used to travel to their place of work With increased use of computers the internet and smart phones more and more people are starting to work from home What are the advantages and disadvantages of this development 78
- Some people argue that the government should give every unemployed person a mobile phone and should make sure they have access to the Internet They believe this is the best way of using public money to reduce the problem of unemployment To what extent do 84
- 1 Some people think that no one should be allowed to work after 65 Others say that people should be allowed to work for as long as they want to Give your own opinion Do you agree or disagree 84
- Today s teenagers have more stressful lives than previous generations Discuss this view and give your own opinion 33
- It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or e 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 118, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: fulltime
...n ever, caused the both parents to work full time, in order to be sustained with cost of ...
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Line 3, column 205, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...orsen, which could show a less efficient labour force in future.
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Line 3, column 220, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...uld show a less efficient labour force in future.
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Line 3, column 231, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...less efficient labour force in future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, second, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1535.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49160331683 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641693811075 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.9369212313 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.076923077 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6153846154 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139327664647 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.047941508254 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471376643105 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0805633874655 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442402229267 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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