In the modern world, the image (photograph or film) is becoming a more powerful way of communicating than the written word.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The present society is trend to embrace the new technologies with open arms. Photographs and film industries are on top equipped with these advances which lead audience less attractions day by day. I completely agree that the written presentations are in danger in sustaining with its followers.
First, with the current socio- economic changes, people become much besier than ever with the competitive life style. They are more attracted to find some entertainments without any effert, to release the pressure. For example, the elders who work during the day, attract to watch a movie or a drama than a searching a book at home or in a library. The TV or home theatres are often available and ready to play on one button press, in almost every home. Second the present images are presented with high graphical advances and resolutions. The stories are build up with imaginations which your brain and soul come to a single point to trust what ever you watch from your eyes. High effect resolutions such as 3D, 4D are popular currently in movies and games which you can live inside the game or the situation of the movie and feel movements. This provides a closer engagement audience than an imagination of a reader.
On the flipped side, people who argue the opposite, claims that reading makes people perfect with creativeness and deep think and educating. According to the psychological theories, reading fluency always combine with the writing skills. Any of these values fallen, could damage to skill of other. But the present education sector already introduce new techniques to improve the youngers with reading and writing fluency. devices such as Tabs and touch screen devices allow children to read and write on screen with the sample of relevant videos.
In nut shell, written words need to be introduce with comply to modern technological advance, where the books may come with a digital copy to access the readers in both ends. This will gives an best answer for both claimers with a long term solution
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 423, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Devices
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Line 7, column 186, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...ess the readers in both ends. This will gives an best answer for both claimers with a...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...e readers in both ends. This will gives an best answer for both claimers with a lo...
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Line 7, column 192, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
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Line 7, column 250, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... both claimers with a long term solution
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, second, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 339.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97640117994 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.29091512845 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59712359121 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631268436578 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 518.4 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9382100243 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7222222222 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.94444444444 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.095589419501 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.027488746255 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282844758743 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0556518462498 0.151304729494 37% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344240297044 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.6 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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