It is becoming more and more difficult to escape the influence of the media on our lives.
Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of living in a media rich society.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
It has become a typical question whether the modern media lead the society to a better future. this essay will discuss both the positive and negative impact of this particular trend.
First, the most important advantage of today’s media is real time information to the public. Most of the media agencies are on a race provide this information such as news alerts. They use new technologies such as satellites CCTV camaras in terms of enhancing the information with additional features. This a definite advantage to the people to keep on touch with important fact around the country as well as overseas. Second, the reality of globalisation, has hit the media to introduce and share new trends and advances of the global field. For example, reality shows which was popular in developed countries, are now seems to spread in widely in other continents of the world.
On the flipped side, the oppositions claims that the modern media has no control of broadcasting their program with no concern of age culture or human values. programs such as education or cartoon, cultural values, are become less important due to low audience. The air time may be preferred for adults’ program which get a higher attention from the community. Moreover, there is a huge criticism on misleading ideas where these private channels may influence the followers. Advertisements such as fast-food product, high sugar soft drinks, alcohol are on the top of youth attractions with its high-tech resolutions and long and multiple time advertisements during peak time media users. These multinational companies pressure the channel owners with great amount of funds to promote their products reserving a large space of air time despite of health and social consequences.
In nut shell, new developments of the medias as accepted where as they provide benefits to the society. It is positive trend that the most of the governments are now in mood to strengthen the public rights on media effectively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, may, moreover, second, so, then, well, for example, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14551083591 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84654340945 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 515.7 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.9405186531 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119006146184 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0406295669539 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0292826535098 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0763026464641 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0136440586256 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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