Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extend do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Nowadays young people dislike sports because of watching TV and
Playing computer games Very few people do sport outside of school
This means that if they do not do exercise during school time, they may
become unfit and suffer health problems .I strongly agree that
children should do sport lessons at school. In this essay I explain why.
Firstly sport is piece of our life without sport we can not imagine our
Life because if you are healthy you can do many things. Especially school
Children feel mentally tired during the lessons. If they do sports during the
Lessons break they can lose their tiredness and sport can inspire their willing
to study.
Secondly today everybody eats a lot. Therefore there are a lot of overweight
People especially among young generation. It is also one reason to add sport
lessons to the school time table. Most children become unhealthy and obese
it can lose their willing to study Therefore they become lazy. In addition eating
a lot without doing sports may suffer from illness like heart disease. Sports
effect everyone’s life and this will help in the future.
To sum up I support sport lessons in the school. Children who do sports will
be healthier, happier adults. They can learn a lot and it gives power too. In
this way we can make a better life for the future.
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- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extend do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exper 56
- Children are now less active in their free time than in the past Therefore sports lessons must be compulsory in schools To what extend do you agree or disagree Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or exper 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86899563319 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2329488407 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558951965066 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 66.9376492632 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3333333333 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2666666667 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.73333333333 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 18.0 4.38176352705 411% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212743916544 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732205074554 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0531012879663 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0736577937094 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442715447686 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 50.2224549098 146% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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