children are now less active in their free time than in the past. therefore, sports lessons must be compulsory in school. to what extent do you agree or disagree?
some statements attributed that necessary to sports lessons become compulsory in schools. it caused by children now tend to less active in their time than in the past. In my perspective, I completely agree with the opinion above which I will elaborate on in this essay.
First of all, it is an undeniable fact that sports are essential to health, people can become healthier than ever before. By playing sport frequently, people can release toxic elements from their bodies to help the government to save money which is allocated for health insurance’s residents. For example, the number of obesity and heart attacks, today, has decreased significantly throughout the world because of sport implementation.
Another reason is that younger generations are able to cultivate a good habit. With the rapid advancement of technology, they tend to do sedentary activities such as playing computer games and chatting through social medial as well. if schools allow their children to do sport as a compulsory lesson in schools, children can improve social interaction with peers. In fact, Experts have demonstrated that to do sport often in school actually enhances the relationship between children with peers. However, there are some challenges for schools if they desire to improve sport education outcomes. By the investment for facilities, schools have to use big budgets, it’s mean decrease for other activities. Furthermore, the safety of students should be the highest with strong activities.
conclusion, conclusion, No matter we need much more resources or facilities, I believe that increased sports support in schools could help to raise student’s awareness of physical activity's importance.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, furthermore, however, if, so, well, for example, in fact, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1474.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58333333333 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03624417596 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.643939393939 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0768644514 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.285714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.21428571429 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.278502813397 0.244688304435 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0943377191636 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102193233729 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.158862595011 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969392694592 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.