As children become adults, their social behaviour changes in some ways.
What are the main differences between young children’s social behaviour and that of adults? To what extent are the changes that take place good?
People believe that when kids grow and get mature in their adulthood, the way they deal with the social activity also gets deferred in some or other way. Well, the reasons behind the following condition and the differences are explained below in the upcoming passages.
On the first hand, child age is the period in which kids have millions of questions in their creative mind because, for them, each and everything is fresh and new. Therefore, for kids, the world is a fairy tale of their own and others are part of it so there is no discrimination against others regarding color, caste, rich or poor. So these are some of the few things which make them more social as compared to adults.
On the other hand, Adulthood is the phase of life where people try to balance their life avoiding unnecessary things and focusing on their goals. As far as social life is concerned, youngsters of these age groups really don't like to waste their precious time. Secondly, As people grow older their friend circle becomes smaller and fewer friends mean low social life. At the same time, people become very selective.
Finally, The patterns of socializing in both cases are totally different but it is very easy to understand that when a kid knows nothing, he tries to grasp it by socializing with others and the same adults who learned a lot in their life avoid unnecessary people into their life which is really good for mental and physical health.
Well to conclude my essay, I would say that the change which occurs in life is totally a part of life and sometimes it can be very good for people but at the same time it can be disturbing. It all depends on person's way of thinking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...olor, caste, rich or poor. So these are some of the few things which make them more social ...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
..., youngsters of these age groups really dont like to waste their precious time. Seco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63545150502 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37654542215 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56856187291 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.0724051123 49.4020404114 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.5 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164830946094 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601244600279 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381999498509 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0939902755656 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0330583386901 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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