Today's new age generation is more wiser then previous one. Teen age kids over 15 are very aware that they know the pros and cause of the life better. They know facts and figures properly. Today 15 years old kid know the thing even better then the elder. Their better understanding shows their maturity level.
However, children are smart at 15 as they are young much parents should keep eye on their certain activities. Like are they not in bad company or like not into drugs stuff like that may ruin their lives. By taking care of this thing kids can be saved to choose them to wrong path or they do not missinturupt such thing by bad influence.
Parent should allow their kid who are over 15 to take their right decisions for him or her life. It depends on individual mind set to learn right and wrong things in life. Parents and teachers are just guide for them. Laws are created to protect them. They should know and aware very well about their safety rules. Laws should liberal but it has too be there.
Nowadays, teens are much active for their studies and extra curriculum activities. Like sports and other stuff. They work on their own to pay their fees .so they self depend too. They carry them selves with self confidence and dignity. They are smart and mature enough undoubtedly.
In my opinion I support new age generation for their liberty to take their lives decisions without any interference of their parents and other people. Society should support them too. But its nessasary to guide them for the right path of the life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so, then, well, as to, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6231884058 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.13139581991 2.80592935109 76% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 380.7 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.6212084912 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 58.0 106.682146367 54% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.5454545455 20.7667163134 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.68181818182 7.06120827912 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 5.01903807615 797% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280837686142 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.081011674631 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0877961891318 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163649342458 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0701193968031 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.6 13.0946893788 50% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 50.2224549098 152% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 11.3001002004 50% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.63 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.58950901804 79% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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