It is irrefutable to say that education has become intergal part of everyone's lives. While masses think that government had better give shcolarship to teenagers therefore, youngsters easily manage their study expenses. I believe that it has some profits as well as drawbacks.
To commence with, there are many advantages but first and foremost is that it is extremely helpful for getting appropriate opportunities of study. In another words, there are many students, who belong to poor family, do not able to pay their school's fees. Hence, if government provide free education to street kids. In order to that they get lucrative job's opportunities due to education. Which is extremely beneficial for their future because of this, they will achieve all comfortable and luxurious things of their lives. Secondly, relationship become stronger between local people and government. So, youngsters will become good citizens, and also give respect to government's policies as well as rules. As a result, they will follow all the rules and regulations.
On the other hand, there are few disadvantages of this trend. Firstly, sometimes, teenagers use this money for wrong things such as they can take drugs therefore, they can be diverted from their moral path. Moreover, there are so many sectors. Which need to improvement such as, health centres, basic needs, infrastruture,road systems as well as public transportation. For example, OX-FORD UNIVERSITY has been revealed that Norway gives equal importance to all sectors and invest similar expenditure. As a result native inhabitant of this nation lead a healthy and comfortable life.
To conclude, it is clear from above mentioned imformation that benefits outshine from it's bad impacts on nation's growth. But, I think that government should spend money on education and provide free eduaction to needy students.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , road
...alth centres, basic needs, infrastruture,road systems as well as public transportatio...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ors and invest similar expenditure. As a result native inhabitant of this nation ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...nefits outshine from its bad impacts on nations growth. But, I think that government sh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39726027397 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93209090328 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.63698630137 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2189079422 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.9473684211 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3684210526 20.7667163134 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.78947368421 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120458780231 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.033768825914 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0346556023886 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0706187343268 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349084027374 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.45 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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