children should always follow their parents' advice
to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement ?
In Vietnam, it is normal for children to listen to their parents. From an early age, children have been taught to be good and listen to the teachings of adults. Therefore, children should always follow the advice of their parents that has been imposed on them. I don't quite agree with this.
Agree that, parents are the ones who have gone before, they have gone through the challenges of life and learned many life lessons. So their advice can be very good for their children, but the reality is that they always want their children to follow their advice or in other words, they want their children to follow the advice without knowing whether their children want to or not.
Let me give you a few examples of your "advice" for your children. In shaping their future careers, parents should be the ones who are willing to advise their children in their profession, but some parents recommend careers that parents enjoy such as police, doctors, engineers, ... and force their children to go to school. It's not yet known if their children like it or not, and whether the profession is suitable for their children. In deciding on a partner, some parents always give useful advice to their children about choosing a wife or a husband for the future, but there are also some parents who "advise" their children to marry people like this, people like that, and never ask their children if they like it. Through the two examples above, people have found that the phrase "children should always follow the advice of their parents" is not completely true.
In general, it is a good thing for children to listen to their parents' advice, but children should be selective and receptive to the advice that is right for them. Children should make their own decisions so as not to regret the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...arents that has been imposed on them. I dont quite agree with this. Agree that, par...
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Line 3, column 335, Rule ID: IT_IS[6]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: It's; It is
...d force their children to go to school. Its not yet known if their children like it...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, in general, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1508.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83333333333 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52622133651 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.458333333333 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 7.0 0.809619238477 865% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.5065356685 49.4020404114 155% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.714285714 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2857142857 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.64285714286 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.404275936548 0.244688304435 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.173923895135 0.084324248473 206% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862160701818 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.28588316127 0.151304729494 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0379857685755 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 66.07 50.2224549098 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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