In modern times, children are unfit and unhealthy when compared to their parent generation. Unfortunately, because of changing the orientation of eating behavior and inactive living style are the main factor contributing to this problem. In this essay, some rationales behind this stage, as well as some potential measurements, will be put into consideration to tackle this phenomenon.
Affirmatively, children, nowadays, have been spending more time experiencing in the virtual visual world than participating in recreational outdoor activities, especially sports, which is the main cause of sedentary lifestyle. Particularly, due to news reports, teenager immerses themselves into cutting-edge devices for the fictitious network society, such as Facebook or Instagram, without any physical activities. An attractively diversified choice of unhealthy food is another worth mentioning factor. The complexity of fast food with high calories catalyzes the surge in fat intake. In addition, the hazardous oil of fried chickens and potatoes which is served prevalently in KFC chains, are the tremendous fatty acid when loaded into the body, prompting the obesity symptom. As a result, both related actual situation drive the youth to the high body mass these days.
To deal with this tendency, parents are commonly accredited as the primary influencer. First, the parental responsibility in balancing diet to maintain the children’s weight in check with the essential addition of necessary minerals: proteins, carbohydrates, and calcium. In fact, home-cooked meals play the utmost importance to re-set the human nutrition process will mitigate the issue greatly. Furthermore, encouraging their kids to take part in daily exercises could be a good way to be physically fit and efficiently ameliorate children health condition. Japanese families daily lifestyle is the typical example, they inspire their offsprings to play a sport frequently, consequently, Japanese young generations are one of the most motivated and active groups all over the world.
In conclusion, the parent is the most reflection to completely astray daily habit to avoid the bad conditions for their children health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, well, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 325.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.77230769231 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16625102639 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 221.0 176.041082164 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.2266413868 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.066666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6666666667 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.13333333333 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13066335507 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0377419589132 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0276166327745 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0730160941838 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0100910817873 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.19 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.9 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 128.0 78.4519038076 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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