Children today spend more time watching television than they did in the past
Describe some of the advantages and disadvantages of television for children.
The amount of the time that children are spending in watching television have been extremely increasing according to the advancements in technology. These days, people are inundated with many electronic devices such as televisions, mobile phones and laptops. This essay will discuss the advantages and disadvantages of watching tv program for children.
One of the foremost advantages is to be an educational material which was unconventional in the past. Progress in technology have encouraged youth to learn something regardless of the place and the time, which means they can study at home or somewhere else with televisions or laptops whenever they want. For instance, students can learn Mathematics by exploiting Youtube.
However, tv shows have negatively impacted on children in some ways. Studies have shown that children tend to be aggressive after watching television shows which contain fight, murder or bullying. There are also high chances for them to copy the aggressive actions at school without any guilt. For example, after boys watched hero movies such as Avengers or Spiderman, some boys want to act like not only a hero but also a bad guy who hit people or destroy the world.
In conclusion, watching television could be an education provider or a negative influencer depending on how kids use it. In order to make it worth, parents and adults are required to teach them properly.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1199.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 226.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30530973451 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86278740511 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.663716814159 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 369.9 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6516077858 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.9166666667 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.08333333333 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310194945518 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100395773819 0.084324248473 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880655108022 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16839593992 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.08433039261 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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