Education is the third eye of the man. It shapes up the future and plays a prominant role in character building of the children. As providing education to the children is quite an expensive affair, In some countries government bears the costs or makes it affordable to the parents.
This phenomenon has numerous benefits to the
citizens who are living under poverty line. They even struggle to provide basic amensities to their families and live hand to mouth. In that case, they are left with the option of depriving their kids of the formal education. So, If government makes arrangements for free education, right to education will be accessible to all.
Furthermore, In many countries, government-run schools offer immense facilities such as free stationary, mid- day meal,scholarships and low cost fees.If it has to be borne by the people themselves, It would eat sizable chunk of their budgets. In result of that poor people become helpless to give educational opportunities to their offsprings. Therefore, role of the government in supporting costs is appreciable.
Besides this, In modern era, education is not just old fashioned bookish knowledge. Starting from the kindergartens, children are engaged in activity- based learning which costs more. Guardians are unable to pay these sometimes.
On the other hand, some of the drawbacks shortlisted for this policy are: It will overburden the government. Some people are earning attractive salaries and can entitle their kids with the best of the education by spending huge amount of money.
In conclusion, costs of the education shared by the government is beneficial step for the masses. Additionally, It will encourage everyone to use the basic right to education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: , scholarships
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Suggestion: some
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, so, therefore, third, as to, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1466.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3115942029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05455197282 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608695652174 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4269938829 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2352941176 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2352941176 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.64705882353 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190903042655 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0547531793549 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462137068913 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0803384791593 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0521450305689 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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