In today's modern society, there needs numerous factors for children's success in academic settings. Although the existence of friends has some positive effect, I personally believe that parents give a more significant effect on the child’s accomplishment.
It is evident that a child's peers are crucial to their development since friends can support one another. One of the instances is a young child asking his buddies for assistance when he doesn't comprehend a lesson. And when a young person signs up for a sporting event, his buddies could encourage and support him. Even if they have many advantages, they might also have drawbacks. For instance, a classmate who abuses drugs could persuade others to do the same.
On the contrary, there are two major reasons that show that parents have an impact on their adolescents. First and foremost, parents are the first educators in a child's life. Parents provide guidance, support and create a learning environment at home, that comfort teenagers comfortable enough to learn. What is more, they also have abilities to satisfy their children's needs which gives them more chances to be successful in the future. Second, parents are the source of encouragement and motivation. They are the ones who know the importance of education and set expectations for their children's academic performance. Parents frequently create a conducive environment at home. They assist their youth with their homework and engage in discussions about school topics. In short, parents can boost a child's motivation significantly and drive them to succeed.
In conclusion, I do agree that friends from school can have a favorable impact on a child's academic success, but I disagree with the notion that peers have a greater influence than parents. In my opinion, parents are crucial to the success of young people because they provide both financial and moral support.
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- Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success at school Do you agree or disagree with this statement 61
- Climate change is among the serious problems that mankind is currently facing What are its causes Offer some possible solutions to this problem 85
- Computers are being used more and more in education Some people say that this is a positive trend while others argue that it is leading to negative consequences Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Classmates are a more important influence than parents on a child s success at school Do you agree or disagree with this statement 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: doesn't
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, for instance, in conclusion, in short, in my opinion, on the contrary, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 304.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25328947368 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80337084085 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569078947368 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.8641517331 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.7222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8888888889 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258038969011 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.071065387276 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0611506750732 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154060709194 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837211222091 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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