Climate change is a big environmental problem that has become critical in last couple of decades. Some people claim that humans should stop burning fossil fuels and use only alternative energy resources, such as wind and solar power. Others say that oil, gas and coal are essential for many industries, and not using them will lead to economic collapse.
What is your opinion?
Support your point of view with relevant examples.
global warming is a serious issue for environment which has become important for the last decades. Human are claimed to use alternative energy resources such as solar and wind power instead of burning fossil fuels, while the others think that gas and coal play the most crucial roles in many industries. From my perspective, I strongly believe that people being need to be adopted the renewable resources of energy thanks to their mother natures because alternative energy is plentiful, sustainable and reduces the pollution from fossil's dust in a lot of factories.
The changes of using renewable energy are positive for two main reasons. The main reason is that the renewable resources are plentiful and sustainable, therefore, it will be never run out. In the other words, this allows industries remain their operation affectively year to year. The renewable energy, as its facilities, such as, generally require less maintenance than traditional generator and it reduces the cost of operation. Nevertheless, once governments allocate resources to exploit alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power factories can decrease the amount of fossil energy they use daily, having a balance of many energy sources.
Another thing I consider is that having used renewable resources, the pollution in the Earth would decline. this means the carbon dioxide from fossil fuel make greenhouse gasses phenomenal and influent on people's health such as asthma, so that renewable resources the way to solve the temperature change. In china, the country was very polluted because of overcrowded population and the growth of economy, built giant solar farm in Datong County, a region in northern china. that demonstrates the world takes the first step in reducing the climate change.
In conclusion, global warming is a essential obstacle in the 21st century and the reason of using renewable energy are renewable sources are plentiful and it improves air pollution in more countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, nevertheless, so, therefore, while, another thing, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35668789809 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77279370389 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589171974522 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.0094667088 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.384615385 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.1538461538 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259307777589 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0815370908833 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853415506424 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143793808962 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0890939072061 0.056905535591 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.