coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and Bank cards. eventually, we will have cashless society which will we safer and more convenient one. extent do you agree or disagree
In the contemporary society, the rise on using credit cards has replacing the traditional payment tools namely coins and paper money. this may lead to the advent of cashless society and bring convenience to users. this essay partly agrees with the given opinion.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that using plastic cards instead of cash and coins brings several benefits to people. Firstly, it is more convenient and easier to pay bills. Moreover, credit payment also gives consumers more chance to experience the variety of goods and services ranging from domestic products to oversea ones. For example, online shopping has become popular nowadays, therefore, having a credit or bank card will make it easier to buy products from long distance. In addition, compared to bringing a large amount of cashes, using plastic cards prevent consumers from being rubbed.
On the other hand, every coins has two sides, using credit cards is not always advantageous, especially in underprivileged areas where technology has not developed yet. For instance, most of stores and markets in these areas only prefer cash. therefore, buyers who do not bring coins and cash can not use their services.Additionally, registering a bank account cost users monthly fee for banking services.this may lead to the fact that fewer people using plastic cards since they can not afford those fee.
In conclusion, the rise of cashless society may bring more advantages to consumers in comparison with traditional payments. Nevertheless, coins and cash still hold an important position in paying methods.
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- coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and Bank cards eventually we will have cashless society which will we safer and more convenient one extent do you agree or disagree 83
- coins and paper money will soon be replaced by credit and Bank cards eventually we will have cashless society which will we safer and more convenient one extent do you agree or disagree 61
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, may, moreover, nevertheless, so, still, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36904761905 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83910476612 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611111111111 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.2892341083 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.076923077 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.1538461538 7.06120827912 158% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216510008654 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0705269295753 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0441969905079 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123535992004 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471709104361 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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