compare and contrast the culture of big cities and small towns
Tourism has been considered as an important sector in the services industry so that it makes an enormous contribution to the development of national economy. In addition, visitors can have a chance to broaden their mind by travelling to different locations such as large city, small town,…. Although big cities and small towns have divergent cultures, commonalities may exist between these areas.The differences can be seen in the areas of traffic,the pace of life, while the commonalities lie in tourist attractions.
First of all, urban and rural areas have obvious similarities. One common factor is the spectacular sceneries. Both small towns and big cities possess stunning landscapes, but distinctive features can be found in each place. This provide people with a wide range of choices when it comes to entertainment and relaxation when they have a sense of stressful.Furthermore, these places can be considered as tourist attractions for the purpose of making profits. By doing this, the more tourism developes, the more these places become major incomes in urban and rural areas.
Despite the similarities in stunning sceneries, there are still differences between two places. One outstanding difference is the pace of life. People need to have an intensive concentration on their work on a regular basis in order to make their living which unintentionally creates the hustle and bustle of the city. By doing this, citizens have an ability to spend money on high-cost commodities.In contrasts, people who live in countryside tend to have a slow-paced lifestyle as products are cheaper than that of big cities. Furthermore, farming dominates other occupations in small towns, so that they have a comfortable schedule on their daily basis.
Another differences in two places is the traffic systems. City inhabitants always encounter traffic jam in rush hours due to numerous cars, motorbikes.Therefore, people sometimes get stuck in traffic jam for long hours which give them a feeling of irritable when they commute from their home to the workplace and come back home.By comparison, this situation rarely happens in rural areas because the number of population in small town is lower than that of the metropolis. Apart from accidents, it is rarely to see any traffic congestions on small towns.
In conclusion, there are many differences between urban and rural areas in terms of the pace of life and traffic systems.However, the commonalities in other areas including the splendid landscapes, cannot be ignored. Furthermore, the similarities and differences also indicate that actions shoud be taken so as to make small towns are going to be upgraded in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, therefore, while, apart from, as to, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2264.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 425.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32705882353 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54043259262 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18651657602 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543529411765 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 713.7 506.74238477 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.0739903591 49.4020404114 178% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.777777778 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.6111111111 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.83333333333 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148278906698 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474330852744 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685327130822 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0889811331789 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405382211553 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 120.0 78.4519038076 153% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.