Comparison of hockey and soccer
Sports can mean life, and recently, many people do it professionally. Hockey and soccer are popular sports in the world, but soccer may be more well-known in a certain part of the world. Mostly, they have similar things in general, like both cannot touch the puck or ball and they are scored by how many goals in. This essay will compare what are the differences in details.
Firstly, a lot of people in the four-season country may know hockey because they have the field to play and merely they familiar with the cold temperature. To play hockey, people need to stay on the freezing floor which usually has a temperature of about 0 – 4 Celsius degrees and it needs a minimum of six people on each team to play. They play with a hockey stick to hit a pluck to the enemy's direction and expect a goal from it. It seems easy for spectators to see, however, a lot of pieces of training are needed to play for a professional hockey player such as using the ice skating shoes, holding the stick while sliding, and balancing the body while using a lot of protective pads covered the body.
Secondly, soccer, as the most popular game in the world, is a widely known game which is held in a vast grass pitch. Not only people from certain countries but also, I believe, most people over countries love in this sport very much. It needs 22 people to play soccer, and on each side, there must consist of eleven people who work as a team to make a goal by kicking the ball to the enemy's side. Not like hockey, to protect their body from harm, they only use pads for shins and may use bandages for knees or head.
Overall, the two games are well-known among their own fans and more or less they have similarity in general.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 121, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, in general, such as, more or less
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41509433962 5.12529762239 86% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.28490661252 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547169811321 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.4384113246 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4615384615 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.69230769231 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158591047933 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583970624669 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703917174372 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897955767379 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0538824691377 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.65 12.4159519038 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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