Completing university education is thought by some to be the best way to get a good job. On the other hand, other people think that getting experience and developing soft skills is more important.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
People have a different view on whether young people either complete their academic or have more experience and soft skills to earn a good position in society. I believe that both views are all over the best way for students.
On the one hand, there are various reasons why people believe that university education is the best option if students want to have a good salary or position in the future. First of all, the majority of corporations all over the world always like finding workers who have certificates or diplomas from universities. For instance, if a person who has experience in a certain job at about 2 years, but do not have a good degree from the university. Therefore, the salary of him which is still lower than other people who have a good result from the university.
In spite of these arguments, I also believe that people should undergo variety of jobs when they are youth because they can gather various experience and knowledge for their life. For example, some people do not know what major they want to work in the future. Therefore, going to a part-time job which can help them consider what major they like and want to do. Besides, the young person should learn and enhance their soft skills such as verbal skills because this skill is very convenient for a young person when they go to the interview.
In summarize, it might seem sensible for somebody to do encourage their children to complete their education rather than undergoing various experience or soft skills. Whereas I think that both opinions are the best way for young people to find a good job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, whereas, for example, for instance, i think, such as, first of all, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1319.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74460431655 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47360947885 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521582733813 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 413.1 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1906841255 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.916666667 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22835655625 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940369102844 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683016849625 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155615839636 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522846602089 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.51 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.39 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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