Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
It is true that computers have changed the whole world since they were invented. While I agree that computers have played an important role in our lives for the last hundred years, I believe that they are far from the most vital innovation.
Admittedly, people derive a large number of benefits from the invention of computers. First and foremost, computers provide individuals with different ways to relax. With the proliferation of modern computers, entertainments such as video games and 3D movies are becoming more popular than before. For example, children in Vietnam might spend hours watching animated cartoons without getting bored. Looking back on the past, people's lives seemed tedious as there were not many means of entertainment for them to choose. Another reason is that computers have changed the way information is stored. A computer can store huge amount of data that cannot be kept in a human brain. Apart from that, documents contained in a computer can exist for a really long time, which help people to retrieve old news and have better understanding of the past.
However, there are some other breakthroughs that are as necessary as computers, such as the internet or nanotechnology. Firstly, the internet is beneficial to people in all aspects. From an educational perspective, correspondence courses via the internet are a great approach that allows students to attend any classes, regardless of distance or time. From a cultural perspective, learning about exotic traditions and customs has never been this easy by using the internet, which helps to enhance mutual understanding among nations. Secondly, applying nanotechnology on a large-scale may lead to a promising future. In healthcare industry, using nanobots tends to cure more quickly with less pain than other remedies do. Besides, the production of super materials based on nanotechnology is likely to create more sustainable objects.
In conclusion, although computers are indispensable in our lives, I disagree that they are the most notable innovation over a hundred years.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 27, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...nnovation. Admittedly, people derive a large number of benefits from the invention of computer...
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Line 3, column 473, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'many means'.
Suggestion: many means
... lives seemed tedious as there were not many means of entertainment for them to choose. An...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, really, second, secondly, so, while, apart from, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1749.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.36503067485 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98896593277 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.644171779141 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 547.2 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9198782615 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.1666666667 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1111111111 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.05555555556 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176536922901 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0458366495624 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0605053838793 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121287331503 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0637644799665 0.056905535591 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.57 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.