Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Computers play an undeniably vital role in our lives today, which leads to make many people think it is the greatest breakthrough for the history of human development ever since. However, there are still others don't completely idealize its role like that, and I belong to this group.

It is undoubtful that computers has changed our lives so much. They not only open a new era of technology but also put the first steps in diversifying the communication matter. Every activities, aspects, careers in our everyday lives need computers. With the help of computers, both human intelligence and strength is saved and used in a more logic and proper way. Computers, along with the Internet, permanently turn communicating difficulties into interesting experiences.

Nevertheless, computers still cannot replace many particular things in order to be recognized as the most vital invention ever before. Human and health issues are always the most critical matters of each people. The true meaning of the invention is created to serve its users. Without human, or health, the modernization of this world is nothing, as it is formed to serve no one. For example, how can your computer be useful once your health is threatened because of air pollution? Can it save your life? Afterall, computers are just facilities to help our lives easier, not the best and the only way to make us live longer and better.

In conclusion, computers bring many benefits for our human lives, however, they are not the most important invention ever since. We ourselves have more important inventions to concern, which relate to human and health matters, as no invention is counted when it does not serve its master properly.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 212, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... since. However, there are still others dont completely idealize its role like that,...
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Line 5, column 507, Rule ID: AFTERALL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'after all'?
Suggestion: After all
...f air pollution? Can it save your life? Afterall, computers are just facilities to help ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, nevertheless, so, still, for example, in conclusion

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1425.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08928571429 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79310146904 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603571428571 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.5911562894 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.0625 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.149966277531 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496490799294 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04546275832 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0877764230007 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0528341789574 0.056905535591 93% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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