Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Computers are often regarded as the most crucial invention of the last hundreds years. In my opinion, I strongly agree that they are the most important invention for centuries for various reasons.
First and foremost, computers pioneered many later devices or services. The generations of modern devices are the fruits of the constant innovation for the last hundreds of years; without computers, we might not be able to produce such sophisticated devices and many important parts might not be developed. Additionally, Internet might not be invented without the appearance of computers. Secondly, computers revolutionized how we store and exchange information. A common computers now can store up to gigabites of information and a computer can easily get access to the internet with a few clicks. This created platforms that enable users to share or download information from all over the world. For example, Google allows users to search information at a staggering speed. Last but not least, computers make everyday tasks easier and faster with great accuracy. Computers are able of doing simple tasks and even complex tasks, the introduction of computers in to everyday life reduce the usual time needed to finish tasks and decrease human involvement. Furthermore, computers can help diminish the risks of working in hazardous zones like mines, construction sites, etc. For example, scientists have created machines or robot controlled by computers that can assemble car's parts.
In conclusion, computers are the most important invention of the last centuries since it can make life easier and it paved the way for the later generations of machines.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 260.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37307692308 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01553427287 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90169048872 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569230769231 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3956964377 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7857142857 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5714285714 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57142857143 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.286954283973 0.244688304435 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0977763188775 0.084324248473 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913397817762 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223421751441 0.151304729494 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707172911064 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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