Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
It is a common belief that Computers is one of the most essential creation over a course of century. I am totally agree with this idea.
To start with, the efficient of computer can be easily demonstrated in entertainment. With the development of social media that are usually used on our computer, people in recent days can relax and entertain by using the computer, without concern to the payment, health and timing. It is also noticeable that computer programs and applications can help people to find their hobbies, which bring their life become happier. Take an example of the young generation, it is obvious that they often do leisure activity via using their computer devices, such as listening to music, chatting with friends and playing online game, which may lead to the development of their creativity and logical thinking. That's why computer help people overdue stressful and support them to find what they interests.
Moreover, computer also has a huge impact on our job and study. Through using modern computer, we can accomplish work at everywhere, without attention to geography boundaries. Student also have more choices of accessing to new knowledge, not just an academic things that they have to learn at school or library. For instance, many people can have more opportunities to acquire a job, while COVID-19 disease has spread out the world, which subsequent to countless employment. Also many interesting and useful knowledge can be gained by many students all around the world. Those advantages make human feel more comfortable to work and learn.
To sum up, the invention of computer is the most important thing in our daily life, not only reducing stress but also supporting us to learn new things and work more effective than the past.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 115, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
... over a course of century. I am totally agree with this idea. To start with, the e...
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Line 3, column 699, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
... their creativity and logical thinking. Thats why computer help people overdue stress...
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Line 3, column 783, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'they' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'interest'
Suggestion: interest
...sful and support them to find what they interests. Moreover, computer also has a huge ...
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Line 5, column 260, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'thing'?
Suggestion: thing
... to new knowledge, not just an academic things that they have to learn at school or li...
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Line 5, column 440, Rule ID: SUBSEQUENT_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'after'
Suggestion: after
...disease has spread out the world, which subsequent to countless employment. Also many interes...
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Line 5, column 476, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...ich subsequent to countless employment. Also many interesting and useful knowledge c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, while, for instance, such as, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1480.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06849315068 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68416259608 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619863013699 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4961422384 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.714285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.28571428571 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109148063112 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0412554735787 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0348043906614 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0745471717588 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305849497201 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.