Computers are often argued to be the most important invention of the last hundred years. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
People always demonstrate that computers which were the most significant invention during the last century. I strongly suppose that in 100 years there is load of new tools was developed and improve human life so much but personal computers are the most important invention.
Firstly, today, mankind use computer everywhere in all the field of the life. To illustrate this mention by an example, scientists cannot create the rockets which use to put outer space or other planets such as the March or the Moon without using mainframe and supercomputer. Besides, computing exactly the statics is predicted the time and money which the government authorizes to get a change come to the new world and finding the right way to solve some emerging problems. Thus online working is the best choice for younger people who independent spacing of job, at that time the amount of work can be dramatically finished soon and get more fortune for those companies.
Secondly, cyber education is the popular field which almost parents who interested. There are lots of teaching methods are given by great professions all the world, but e-learning which has been developed in the near future. Everyone knows that people like to learn a lot of things thought by pictures, audios, videos which show on the presentations, and creating of those products creators must be used the PC or laptop in order to collect crude materials before choosing the golden suitable for lectures.
To sum up, although inventors create several tools to help human reducing work by hands, computers also the perfect tool to create the future of humanity.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: USE_TO_VERB[1]
Message: Did you mean 'used'?
Suggestion: used
...entists cannot create the rockets which use to put outer space or other planets suc...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'getting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'authorize' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: getting
...d money which the government authorizes to get a change come to the new world and find...
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Line 2, column 476, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ht way to solve some emerging problems. Thus online working is the best choice for y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, thus, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05243445693 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61926048089 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.1506551105 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.9 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0845915637938 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0337108436556 0.084324248473 40% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318107392234 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0519302223025 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386102336254 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 13.0946893788 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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