Computers will become more intelligent than human being.some people find it is a positive development while others think it is negative.
It is irrefutable that without computers all technical work will halt. Therefore, computers are now a crucial need for whole universe and by each passing day use of computer accelerated due to its advancement in every field. So, a fair amount of society say, it is a favorable development while others are opposit to this phonomenon.In the upcoming paragraphs this essay sheds light on both perspectives.
To embark with, people take plethora of advantages from artifical intelligence. First of all, computers are able to do every work related to study or job, making easy and fast for humans.For example, the calculations which are done by AI are more accurate and reliable, being a humam it may be impossible for tackling millions of equations in seconds. Therfore, technology is in the favore of human by playing a profund roll in every field of life.
Although, computers have several benefits to world, some drawbacks are also originated by it. Firstly, unemployment is a major problem due to heavy usage of technology. For instance, in many organisations and companies all records are stored and maintained with the help of softwares instead of manual labour. As a result, organizations rely on computer for efficent and relible work than employers.
To conclude, despite having advatages, there are most concerning drawbacks of technology. Although it makes the life of human being easy by providing several facilites, it accelerate the unemployment rate at alarming stage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, no doubt, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28384279476 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.24113970022 2.80592935109 116% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655021834061 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 398.7 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 133.965728179 49.4020404114 271% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 172.857142857 106.682146367 162% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.7142857143 20.7667163134 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.8571428571 7.06120827912 239% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176354932105 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.074316537463 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322573809971 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0899626929614 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0531925958535 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.8 13.0946893788 151% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.54 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.0 11.3001002004 150% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.94 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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