Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is argued that these days, every nation is becoming much more the same as a result of people can purchase the same goods from anywhere they want. Although it will have some drawbacks, I believe that this development brings more positive results.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages to the argument that some countries are now less different from others since people can buy merchandise all around the world. Firstly, it costs citizens millions of dollars when they get what they want that does not exist in their country and harms the environment as well. Taking goods from another nation will require people to spend money on either travelling to that nation or delivering from that nation by trains, aeroplanes, etcetera which will release carbon dioxide as using too much fossil fuels. Secondly, when a nation becomes more and more similar to another one, it leads to the emergence of a new issue which is the disappearance of a culture, as residents cannot remember what makes the difference of that country.
On the other hand, I assert that the consequences of this hot issue are positive developments. First and foremost, it allows consumers to have various choices for any kind of product which can satisfy their needs. For example, a girl who is considering buying cosmetics can think of a local brand, like M.O.I, or some global brands, such as Dior and 3CE. Apart from this, people who would like to move to another country to start a new life can get used to that strange region as fast as possible because they can feel the familiar atmosphere of their home country. To illustrate, in the USA, there are some regions where several Vietnamese families live called Vietnamese communities which will let the newcomer feel peace of mind due to having numerous relatives to live with.
In summary, personally, I state that it is not bad for countries to become more similar to other ones due to the ability to purchase the same goods from any region in the world. Each country will have its uniqueness which will allow it to be differentiated from any country in the world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 308, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...cs can think of a local brand, like M.O.I, or some global brands, such as Dior an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, in summary, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 20.0 7.30460921844 274% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1739.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 362.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.80386740331 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36191444098 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52159713732 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533149171271 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.3448611374 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.769230769 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8461538462 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.2307692308 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255681170819 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0930047160043 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687041583772 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174544508818 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0704143297027 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.86 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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