Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy same products anywhere in the world.
Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
It is clear the geographical in terms of traditions, food and fashions have already reduced to a great extent with the effects of globalisaion and technology. No one could deny that opening trade facilities enables citizens to enhance their life's qualities due to its substantial impacts on infrastructure which are built and designed by intenational companies. This trend, in my opinion is greatly vulnerable because of variety factors.
One of the benefits i would like to mention is that availability of international products seems to ease some of the asymmetic standards between each countries. For instance, thanks to reforming commerce, citizens in Vietnam able to update the newest fashion samples from well- known branches such as H&M , ZARA as well as in affordable price that an American uses and its facilities reducing gaps between these two countries. This situation is considered to create vast markets to meet individual 's demand along with decline the discrimination in the world.
Moerover, this development is likely to reduce some potential threats on society. Restricting trading between each countries is tend to increase the higher risk of speculation which result in too expensive but low quality products. By contrast, with the competition of international branches, local mufacturers are forced to enhance all aspects of each products. In addition, relocating some industries has broadened our horizon, which has a very possitive contribution not only in reducing unemployment but also strengthen the economy of these states.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that globalisation has revolutionized the whole world. I am firmly convinced that this development should be expanded to provide a better condition for human 's life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, as well as, in my opinion, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1482.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44852941176 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15292069484 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.669117647059 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.229260437 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 7.06120827912 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0861457415657 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0328975681244 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0293922238448 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0511412495142 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0166202334881 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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