Since the arrival of the advanced technology, exotic commodities such as food, brand, domestic equipment are available for every citizen. In that case, it is often argued that countries are getting resembled due to the fact that globalization enables people to buy the identical goods throughout the world. From my view of point, I opine that it is both positive and negative to the country.
First and foremost, the local features of certain countries are unable to highlight its characteristics once it is accessible for people in different nations. One compelling example of this can be seen in the fact that the bubble tea made in Taiwan is expanding its scale throughout the entire earth. In such case, people could relish this delicacy from different countries, suggesting that bubble tea is no longer a traditional feature in Taiwan. As a result, globalization could impose negative impact on the local cultures.
Even more disturbing, though, is that the globalization brings about advantages for the citizens. People are capable to experience the exotic food pursuing the vogue of occidental countries in their own nations. A case in point is that the cosmopolitan city inundated with exotic restaurants provides great opportunity for people to savor the international delicacy without traveling abroad. In this case, people who are indigent could derive the benefit from the availability providing by globalization.
By way of conclusion, as I argued above, globalization could either inflict adverse implications and positive effects on the entire nation. It is vitally important that government should weigh against the merits and demerits of it.
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- Disruptive school students have a negative influence on others. Students who are noisy and disobedient should be grouped together and taught separately. Do you agree or disagree ? give reasons for your answer 84
- Young people today are better qualified than they were in the past Some people argue that this is because competition for jobs is greater than it used to be Others say that people only continue their education because the opportunities exist for them to d 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3908045977 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00508223234 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582375478927 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6338145795 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.230769231 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0769230769 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38461538462 7.06120827912 34% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146088947492 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0489951590945 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323916345567 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.080261334095 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0356124568707 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.47 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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