Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?
Globalization has made everything next to possible nowadays. Due to the advancement in various factors such as international trade, we are able to buy any products found anywhere in the same geographical area and this has made countries alike. This has both positive as well as negative aspects.
The availability of similar products has made the life of human beings more convenient,comfortable and easy. People are always looking for something new and extra that are not available in their country and try to order them through online or via their friends or relatives. If the same thing is available in their place then they don't have to call their friends abroad or shop online. Furthermore, it saves their time and money needed to order online. So, availability of products at same place comforts people in most possible ways.
On the other hand, if the similar products are available in every country then the value of the product as well as the country deteriorates. People using the similar products everywhere does not make the thing extra special. As a result, people slowly stop using those products. In addition to that, people will not have any information about the country where the product was manufactured or built. And also, the country will lose its charm for the availability of unique product in the world.
To summarize, there are both positive as well as negative impacts if all products are available everywhere around the world but I think that the positive aspects outweigh the negative aspects. I also hope that in the coming future, this trend will grow more and make people more accessible to new things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well, i think, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99635036496 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79100694206 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521897810219 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8580538657 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2666666667 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.2 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.343948736769 0.244688304435 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106075741402 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664879157472 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.206770837759 0.151304729494 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0618632572416 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 78.4519038076 60% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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