In the era of global industrilization, familiar goods can be purchased in any country, therefore they start to resemble to each other. This eesay will explain why this alterations dive us more freedom and point out some negative points.
As we know, back in the day, in 1960-s foreign products were quite rare in other countries' markets. It was the main reason why citizens of particular country had troubles with migration, so they were simply adopted to local goods. However, nowadays it it pretty ordinary situation to observe foreigner. So, this circumstances make globalization more and more stronger. Which in turn, brings in new technologies and increases average level of education. Additionally, considerable existance of foreign products allows tourism to develop. At the same time, tourism is extremely significant part of economies for host of countries likewise UAE and France.
On the other hand, countries lose their uniqueness among other countries. It makes population forget its national values, which are essential for government. Further, suck loss lead citizens of a country to obtain most of negative sides of other cultures. Morale of muslim countries, for instance, being affected due to differences with eastern manner of life, while benefits are not so noticable. In addition, a century ago one product was manufactured only in few countries, so their citizenry had multitude of profit from production. Nevertheless, income dicreased owing to foreign competitors, while country might not have money from tourism.
In conclusion, changes in economy worldwide attempt us to have a larger range of activities in other countries. Whereas, they may destroy others morale and in some cases even economy.
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 84
- The diagrams below show the life cycle of a species of large fish called the salmon.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
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Suggestion: it
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Message: Did you mean 'pretties'?
Suggestion: pretties
...to local goods. However, nowadays it it pretty ordinary situation to observe foreigner...
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Message: Use only 'stronger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: stronger
...rcumstances make globalization more and more stronger. Which in turn, brings in new technolog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, likewise, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, whereas, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in some cases, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44237918216 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96850798123 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.68029739777 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.3999262578 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 86.1176470588 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8235294118 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143725331843 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441154778328 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0571375573742 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791805088248 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581672220396 0.056905535591 102% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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