Countries are becoming more and more similar because of people able to buy the same product anywhere in the world. Do you think is a positive or negative development
From ancient time to the modern world, our world is developing in every moment even technology when now a day, simple life of previously converted to complex life with the development of all things and the necessity of people was increased then they try to fulfil their needs. By this, If countries are becoming more and more similar then every citizen can get a plethora of benefits for their life. So I strongly believe that this is a positive improvement in our plant.
Furthermore, I glad to say, I have many reasons for positively this assertion. Firstly, every people can buy branded and quality products which are very expensive and qualitative. All counties have been two types of products, the first one is original and another one is a local product which may be same as the original product in all sides even shape and service. But, it has been cheapest and not perfect quality. As an example, Samsung and Apple were world-famous phones and computer brand respectively. 10 years ago every people could not buy these devices anywhere but now they can buy and sell any branded in every country because of all counties will be similar.
Indeed, the other reason is every region will be reached sustainable development quickly. Some developing lands exported cheapest and low-quality products then that countryman purchased and used these items while that country can not be reached sustainable development. But, todays all regions are becoming the same that means every country had been everything and you were not necessary to bring some items online.
In conclusion, Today world more similar so It was a positive improvement in our world. Hence, every nation can spend their lifetime in the same style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 335, Rule ID: LESS_MORE_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'?
Suggestion: than
...ries are becoming more and more similar then every citizen can get a plethora of ben...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98954703833 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62227011384 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574912891986 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.8496415347 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.285714286 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290368314098 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0901331377248 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0699328114417 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172395658972 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0322497778587 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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