Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating to the environment, population and education as well . What problems will your country face in the next 10 years? How can these problems be overcome
It is inevitable to say that the nations across the globe will definitely face the intense consequences in the upcoming decade in correlation with the ecosystem, population and the education as well. The world-wide news such as depletion of the Ozone layer, melting of the glaciers and alteration in the climatic cycle, are significantly prevalent these days. If analyzed deeply, all of the contributing elements seem to be interconnected which following essay will discuss further, and will also present some solutions.
To start with, the first and foremost issue will be the uncontrolled pollution. The contributors such as the deforestation and the excessive use of the fossil fuels hold the responsibility of causing extreme pollution. In addition to this, the other factor will be the poverty. Because of the overpopulation, there will be the reduction in the number of the schools and the teachers; which, in turn, will lead to the overall lack of educated students. For example, the recent survey done by the students of Oxford University shows that the percentage of Literacy rate will decrease from 78% to 46% in the upcoming 5 years, especially in the underdeveloped countries.
However, in order to tackle such problematic situation at the large scale, the individuals and the government should join their efforts. One of the possible solutions would be the public awareness in order to educate the general public through the seminars, lectures and the video presentations. The major goal will be to make them more knowledgeable and well-educated about their surroundings, the education system and the over-growth in their population. Take the case of Japan, the means of media such as television, radio and newspapers have tremendously assisted in raising the Literacy rate and spreading the awareness in each and every corner of the country.
To conclude, taking everything into account, it must be said that these economic issues will be crucial to our society. Due to lack of education, there will be the existence of social and economic instability, therefore leading to the devastation of the lives of the community members. Whereas, undertaking the appropriate steps may prove beneficial to curb such problems in our economy.
- Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal Some people however think that other type of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Nowadays there are more opportunities for women than there were in the past Some people think this situation has cause more problems than it has solved What are your opinions on this 56
- In some cultures children are often told they can achieve anything if they try hard enough What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message 89
- Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment but population and education as well What problems will your country face in the next ten years How can these problems be overcome 67
- Nowadays a growing number of people with health problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor Do you think this is a positive or negative development 61
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Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
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Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... of the lives of the community members. Whereas, undertaking the appropriate steps may ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, well, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29608938547 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08687907866 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.581005586592 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 601.2 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2879762623 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.4 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8666666667 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.6 7.06120827912 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280467393214 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0869375995629 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582522159874 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161390339423 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0417954202876 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.