Countries should produce the food that their population eats, and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons, examples to your answer.
According to the statement, nations should minimise the production of food upto that level which their residents consume as well as import system should be little in probability. I completely disagree with the statement and reasons are discussed in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, in contemporary settings, natality rates become increases day by day and number of residents become to be addition in the proportion of citizenry. Due to which, there is necessity to produce foodstuffs in huge quality. By follow this criteria, if nation inclines the production of food, thus, they also stored extreme amount of meal in stores and godowns. For instance, if natural disasters such as earthquake, flood and so on has came into nay state or nation. Therefore, they face shortage of food at that time. Hence, if nation stored additional quantity of food, then this may leads to helpful in these catastrophic situations.
Furthermore, if nation increases the production of foodstuffs, thus, this may leads to their progression and improve in economy to. In this criteria, if nation exports food such as wheat, rice and so on with super quality to foreign traders. Therefore, this nation has got maximum outcomes from these merchants which leads to their economic development. Apart from that, their bonding with foreign nations become prolong and they also import superior information from these countries. For instance, GM crops and Bt cotton, are such examples which are come in farm industry and show positive aspects to them. Because, by follow these, the yielding of crops become maximize and also give nourishment to the soil and improve the quality of seeds produce by imported manner. As a result, this criteria, goes toward the progression of a nation.
To recapitulate, I personally consider that nations should produce large stuff if foods in comparison to as little as possible. Because, this becomes helpful in numerous ways such as leads to development and economy rate and so on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, hence, if, may, so, then, therefore, thus, well, apart from, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1676.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18885448916 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77518564069 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53560371517 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.8678806414 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.5882352941 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.29411764706 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135636681706 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0471639974539 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0472440389703 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102857590213 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0513974183866 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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