As a country develops, people tend to buy more cars. Do the advantages for the individuals and outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Numbers of car buyers have been increasing by leaps and bounds in every corner of world. Even though buying four-wheelers have some benefits for car owners, the drawbacks for the nature are many. I firmly believe that advantages for the oneself can outweigh the disadvantages for the nature surroundings.
To start with, there are some merits of purchasing car for car owners. First and foremost, four-wheel owners can get extra compensation by giving car as rent to others. Secondly, automobiles and some splendid facilities therein, provide comfort and privacy to the owner. For example, air conditioner, map, GPS for navigation, and many more. Thirdly, car owners also use their car at their flexible time, because of their private car they do not need to wait as they have to for public transport. The other positive for car owners is, car is a symbol of lavish lifestyle, consequently, for flaunting purpose car buyers are increasing daybyday because, they want to achieve social status.
However, there are some demerits to the environment by cars. The main drawbacks from car to environment is car emits many pestiferous gases, fumes in the air and horns of car create vociferous voice which leads to air and noise pollution. Moreover, more numbers of cars are rising in developed and developing countries of world, thereby creating gridlock. Lastly, car requires some fuels such as petrol and diesel It may be leads shortage of that fuels in next few decades.
At the end, car makes person's life easy and provides some liberty. Humans can take precautions to save environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 234, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'oneself'?
Suggestion: the; oneself
...y. I firmly believe that advantages for the oneself can outweigh the disadvantages for the ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, for example, such as, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1333.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10727969349 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73267384607 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.613026819923 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6331009017 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8666666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.06666666667 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19546468083 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0774518714108 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913050349007 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11373987766 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0920162334543 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.