As a country develops, people tend to buy more cars. Do the advantages for individual outhweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Every country has been developing rapidly, thereby buying cars for individual has become basal. Even though purchasing cars for ones lf has some merits for qn individual, the demerits for the natural surroundings are more. I think that disadvantages for the environment are higher than that of advantages for an individual.
To initiate with, there are some advantages of buying cars for individuals. Firstly. All the automobiles have great facilities such as air conditioner,GPS, navigation, and so on whereby a person can feel comfort and relaxation in a car. Secondly,for some people, having an expensive car is a symbol of sumptuous lifestyle and a medium to brag infront of thier kith and kins as well as peers. Thirdly, car gives privacy and freedom to go tgeir work plac without any distrubunc and fast as compared to public transport.
Howevee, tgere are more demerits for environment from cars. The major disadvantage for the environment by using car is pollution; every car emits fumes and healtg pestiferous pollutants therein, which are harmfull not only fo the environment also for humans and animals. moreover, every car and other vehicles nees fules: petrol and diesel, ergo , there is possibility to have scarcity of fuels in next few years. Furthermore, increasing number of cars can create major gridlofk in mega cities and metro cities all over the world. In addition, increasing nukber of vehicles lead to global warming and will thereby create insalubrious environment around mankind.
To conclude, in my opinion, buying cars can make people's lofe more easy and comfortable albeit cons for the environment are much higher and fatal for not animals but also human beings.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, i think, in addition, such as, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 4.0 24.0651302605 17% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 273.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22710622711 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06481385082 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90457070527 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6336996337 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 449.1 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0617865997 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.769230769 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8461538462 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.337115153027 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136751042005 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.117872092951 0.0667982634062 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.225239977985 0.151304729494 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109933432485 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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