A country which has free healthcare has a healthier population. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recenr years, healthcare has become one of the pressing problems all around the world. Facing the issue, some countries have started provide people with free healthcare service. Therefore, it is believed that countries with free healthcare have healthier population. From my perspectives, I largely agree with the statement although with some reservations.
First of all, countries with free healthcare help improve the health of the population. For instance, some things such as computers, cars or holidays are luxuries which people should pay for themselves, but healthcare is a necessity not a luxury. If people do not have access to free healthcare, minor health problems may become much worse. Also, the cost of healthcare should not stop people from going to the doctor. If poor people have to pay for healthcare, they might not visit the doctor when they are ill. If healthcare becomes more expensive, there maybe some negative effects in the future. For example, if only rich people can afford healthcare, they may be much healthier and may live longer than poor people. The result of this could be an unequal and divided society.
However, free healthcare does not always result in a healthy population. In occurrence, if people choose to have an unhealthy lifestyle, free healthcare might not help them. Some people believe that if humans have unhealthy lifestyles, they should not receive free healthcare. In addition, healthcare comes in many forms and some of these forms of healthcare may not be essential. Most doctors think that if people want costemic surgery just to improve their appearance, they should pay for it themselves. Nevertheless, doctors think that government should pay for some forms of cosmetic surgery.
In conclusion, I am in judgement that free healthcare service does not decide wether a country has a healthier population due to some individuals have unhealthy lifestyles. People should pay for it and learn to raise awareness about unhealthy way of life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, nevertheless, so, therefore, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1681.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23676012461 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78938520654 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.510903426791 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 506.7 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3345780297 49.4020404114 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 84.05 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.05 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201439695752 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734464462597 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.068306451343 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14367526052 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0341338164319 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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