A Country's future depends its young people there for it is after argued that government should invest heavily in its youth do you agree and disagree?

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A Country's future depends its young people there for it is after argued that government should invest heavily in its youth do you agree and disagree?

It is the undoubtadly the case That the birth rate is dropped over the next 50 years by 2030.it is estimated will be aged 65 and over which as also effecting. The society adversely in this essay. I will examine the possible reason for this trend however some suggest some of the practicals policies. that outhorite parents individual could implement over come the problem of low nationality,
The phenomenon trend could have many determanted effects nagetives out comes firstly effect is economy rate. which country in (70%) people are over to 65 years that country economy sources is very low there is almost urtainly no one salutions to this problem given the completely of its causes. However are option has to be improve do counselling to make general people aware of salution that problem migration is good salution of economy problems because which country youth rate and birth rate are discreased in low. Their countries should of migration and invite the young generation in other country and maintain own economy rate so that migration is very helpful for low income areas and aged people areas,
In fact this has revolted in second major effect of low birth rate. which country have not many young people their countries faced big problem that problem in defence area every one country of main and safe part defence area but some countries aged people more compare as to the young people. So their countries faced defence problems.furthermore it also be possible to salution that problem because every developed country. Have been good technological sources life update own weapons and mantain good realtionship with near and other countries and compalsary every one student learnt military activities in every high school.
In my point of view, our youth is the backbone of our country. Because with the help of youth country develop more frequently,and economic growth of our country is increased because of advanced technology.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, so, as to, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1623.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08777429467 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62999502879 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498432601881 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5966208479 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.25 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5833333333 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.58333333333 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160042732364 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581515486755 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462992397225 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0934979402531 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395910545401 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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