The crime rate nowadays is decreasing compared to the past due to advance technology which can prevent to solve crime.
Do you agree or disagree?
In this 21st century, technology has been being accelerated by leaps and bounds. Owing to advance technology, presently, the cases of crime are declining vis-á-vis previous decades and it assists to solve crime. I partially agree with this statement.
On one hand, technology has been evolving in all sectors, which is very helpful to the people, it makes the lives of individuals easier than past. Most of the time, crimes have been committed by humans to meet their needs because they do not have kind of academic qualifications and any skills, which assist them to get better job but in last few decades the computer technology is developed in all fields and it helps to reduce the crime rate. For an example, The government of India provide free short courses of computer : IT - Information technology; CCC; Telly communication; Data entry and many more and give certificate after completion of course and provide placement any many places : in malls as a cashier, in hospital; in a company and so on. Not only that but also they can do the data entry from home and earn money.
One the other hand, an increasing crime rate has become an alarming issue for many of the nations. In the past some crimes were very highly committed : theft of automobile, cash money, gold jewellery and many more things but, nowadays, these types of crime are less committed, after introducing some technical gizmos : cameras - which record the time laps, GPS - which tracks the current location of vehicle and so on. For an instance, one cyber research has shown that, in India, the cars, bikes, jewellery such kind of things stealing cases were very high 50 years ago but after representing of Cameras, GPS - Global Positioning System the rate has been gradually declined still today.
In conclusion, on account of advance technology and gadgets people are doing jobs instead of crime and earn money also it decrease the crime rate compared to the past and unemployment rate as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 123, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'decreases'?
Suggestion: decreases
...instead of crime and earn money also it decrease the crime rate compared to the past and...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, still, well, in conclusion, kind of, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1640.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93975903614 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61711164385 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.599397590361 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 99.4754008381 49.4020404114 201% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 149.090909091 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.1818181818 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.305356844853 0.244688304435 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111891607784 0.084324248473 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100115079323 0.0667982634062 150% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.209176323432 0.151304729494 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975913175969 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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