Critically evaluate whether the cause of delinquent behaviour on teenagers is mainly genetic or environmental. Analyze the effects this behaviour has on society
In recent years, youth crime is rife, which is a hotly debated issue over the world. Some people argue the reason is genes. However, in my point of view, living surroundings are overwhelmed. In this essay, I will investigate some environmental causes of juvenile delinquent and their effect on social life.
There is observed that environment plays a significant role in upbringing human. To commence with, family is the first school to educate children. As contemporarily parent, almost they support their offsprings full of conditions, sometimes they are so workaholic that forget important responsibility with children. That brings about children's free and uncontrolled lifestyle, they tend to have more wrongful actions and lead to committing crimes. Besides, school educative shortage and befriend with evil-minded peers also produce extremely destructive effects such as defiance, aggression, or even thief, murder, so on. Gradually, these actions are given free rein to develop and hard to adjust. Furthermore, media still brings negative effect on teens. Through bad movies or violent games, they try to imitate negative behaviour or actions to become similar to characters. That can be slowly formed in their mind and lead them to turn over new leaf.
Deviant manner poses a serious threat to society. Firstly, badly-behaved children often have more chances to get poor performance. They are likely to lose motivation to learn hard and achieve their academic goals, causing their hopeless future. Moreover, youth crimes make society chaotic, lose human value. Due to having a directionless vision, some adolescents intend to commit crimes as a way of making a living, they might do anything even though it can kill or harm someone. Last but not least, committing illegal acts early in adolescence easily creates a culture of negativity and violence, people have a tendency to use extreme or disrespectful language to behave with each other, often leading to conflicts in the organization and in life.
In conclusion, while research strongly indicates a certain extent of genetic predisposition of criminality, I firmly believe that environmental element has predominant in criminal trends. Therefore, it exerts a direct influence on society particularly making chaos and violence in life. Finally, I highly recommend that parent and school should care for children more especially in development age.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2042.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 373.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.4745308311 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.39467950092 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95925365311 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 249.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.667560321716 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 646.2 506.74238477 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4865780728 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.8181818182 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9545454545 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0960492726445 0.244688304435 39% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0240646586212 0.084324248473 29% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0455997139977 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0598765753251 0.151304729494 40% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0326865137664 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.15 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 78.4519038076 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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