‘Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment. What problems are associated with global warming and how could they tackled at a national level”
Nowadays, our "Common Home" means that the environment faces serious conditions, which is the most alarming problem today. It is true that global warming is probably the most worrying threat to our planet. While the effect of it is extremely serious, I hold a firm belief that some steps can be taken by the government to address this issue.
In terms of the natural problem, first of all, the planet's surface temperature has risen over the years result in raising sea level because polar ice caps melting. One recent data suggests that over the past 20 years, sea levels have increased by 0.13 inches a year which is rough twice the speed of the preceding 80 years (Skillful 4, Reading and writing). Therefore, the place of greatest influence is the low-lying areas such as the Netherlands. Scientists predict that in the future this country will be covered by seawater if climate change continues. Another effect is that some species are at risk of extinction. As the ice melts in the North Pole, some species like polar bears and tropical frogs can not adapt to a new environment that leads them to death. The last but not least effect of high temperatures is natural disasters happen frequently around the world. Every year floods, landslides, earthquakes, tsunamis or hurricanes cause damage to billions of people, their homes, and properties. In Vietnam, six people died in a recent landslide in Quang Tri province. Thus, the consequences of global warming are extremely important and alarming.
Nevertheless, effective policies must be adopted to deal with those problems or at least reduce the effects Firstly, the government needs to raise awareness of people via radio, television, or other mass media such as Facebook, Zalo, and so on, and introduce potential methods to protect the environment such as reducing our dependence on fossil fuels and promoting alternatives like plant plastic, biodiesel, wind, solar energy, and planting more trees to provide oxygen to the atmosphere and absorb carbon, reducing soil and ecosystem erosion. Secondly, it is necessary to set up stricter laws to punish individuals and companies who pollute the environment by discharging garbage, wastewater, or toxic fumes into the environment. Finally, the government needs to collaborate with other countries to find out potential ways to solve these issues.
In conclusion, although global warming is a serious problem that causes rising sea levels, animal extinction, and disasters of nature. However, there are measures that the state can do to solve by raising citizen consciousness, setting law, and joining hands with others. For a green, clean and beautiful environment, we will contribute to protecting that common house.
- Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment What problems are associated with global warming and how could they tackled at a national level 89
- Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment What problems are associated with global warming and how could they tackled at a national level 89
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- Global warming is one of the biggest threats to our environment What problems are associated with global warming and how could they tackled at a national level 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 377, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'of the greatest'.
Suggestion: of the greatest
...ading and writing. Therefore, the place of greatest influence is the low-lying areas such a...
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Line 2, column 777, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'not the least'.
Suggestion: not the least
... that leads them to death. The last but not least effect of high temperatures is natural ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, at least, in conclusion, such as, first of all, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2297.0 1615.20841683 142% => OK
No of words: 438.0 315.596192385 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24429223744 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57476223824 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80680162462 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 176.041082164 157% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.630136986301 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 696.6 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 0.809619238477 988% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 101.168108362 49.4020404114 205% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 120.894736842 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0526315789 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.47368421053 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186133428613 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.051961175227 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0712994788087 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109963589452 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327035335432 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.79 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 139.0 78.4519038076 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.