In this modern era, people are realizing the importance of their traditional ways, especially in the field of medicine. While a stratum of society claims that alternative medicines like Ayurveda and Homeopathy could be dangerous, others contend that they are the oldest forms of medicines that existed before allopathy. As far as I am concerned, I partially agree with the statement and I will explain the same in this essay.
Nowadays, as people are becoming more conscious about their health, they started researching on the side effects of allopathic medicine. Understanding its impact on human body, they are moving towards alternative therapies like Ayurveda, which does not have any side effects. For example, for the common cold infections, allopathy medicine prescribes steroids like corticosteroids, which have many side effects on human body like High blood pressure, Glaucoma and other such complications. Whereas, in Ayurveda, the medicines are generally herbs and spices which does not have any aftereffects. Moreover, Ayurveda does not only have medicines for curing any diseases, but also in preventing the same. To exemplify, many Ayurveda medicines include turmeric and pepper which can act also a preventive medicine for many diseases.
On the flipside, there are few drawbacks in alternative medicines too. Firstly, although these medicines existed since many centuries, still there are no proven evidence on its effects. Furthermore, these medicines take longer durations to show positive reactions on a body. To elucidate, for critical diseases like Cancer, it would take ages to cure the disease in Ayurveda, before which the patient would die. Moreover, alternative therapy like acupuncture requires expertise to execute the therapy in a precise manner, as even a small mistake would have adverse effects on the human body. Hence, some people are afraid to experiment themselves with these therapies.
To conclude, I personally believe that although alternative medicines take longer duration to cure, still they are not dangerous and have been effective in many cases.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, still, whereas, while, for example, in many cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1780.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.52795031056 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87010293152 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 594.0 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4364856905 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144440386573 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0544990535288 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0373138062869 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104126010766 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405147950991 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.79 12.4159519038 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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