It is true that today riding bikes has lost its popularity among individuals. This essay will examine the reason and provide some possible solutions to tackle it. In my opinion, there are several reasons why those people less use bicycles as a type of transport. Firstly, individuals consume a considerable amount of time and energy when they go to work by bikes, whereas driving cars and motorbikes can enable them to save their sources. For example, my classmate must spend a half of hour to go to the university if he rides bicycle, but it takes him ten minutes to go by automobiles. Secondly, people are unaware of environment deterioration when they use kinds of transports such as cars, motorbikes instead of bicycles. Consequently, not only the air pollution has become more and more serious, but the natural resources could exhausted. In my opinion, the most obvious solution is for the authorities to raise the awareness of protecting environment among citizens. For instance, the government should help individuals to gain a better understanding of a polluted environment and its sequences through newspapers, magazines and others. By doing this, inhabitants will able to aware of ecosystem issues, which can prevent it from several threats. A further step is to impose heavier taxes people using automobiles. As a result, riding bicycles will gain its popularity among individuals. In conclusion, a significant amount of factors have led to the failure of cycling and the success of other means of transport on a daily basis.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 833, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'exhaust'
Suggestion: exhaust
...erious, but the natural resources could exhausted. In my opinion, the most obvious soluti...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1286.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1235059761 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99479715822 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641434262948 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8251762294 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.9230769231 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3076923077 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2307692308 7.06120827912 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127694078465 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0472462631888 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0681295537457 0.0667982634062 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127694078465 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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