Cycling is more environmentally friendly than other forms of transport. Why is it not popular in many places? And how to increase its popularity?
Nowadays, although traveling by bicycle is friendly with the environment than other forms of transport, it is still not popular in many areas. This problem is caused by some factors, and it should be dealt with by some effective solutions.
There are some reasons why many people choose modern vehicles instead of traveling by bicycle. Firstly, since modern life is getting much busier than in the past, individuals tend to spend as little time on transport as possible. Therefore, they prefer to use other types of vehicles such as cars or motorbikes which would take less time. Secondly, as traffic jams and air pollution is a common problem in many countries, people who chose bicycles as the main transportation might be late for work or face health problems.
Feasible solution should be produced to tackle these aforementioned problems in transportation. Firstly, the government should enact laws about the environment which restricts modern vehicles in the city. For example, to create a green environment, motorbikes will be banned in 2020 in Hanoi and replaced by public vehicles such as buses or metros. Additionally, more lanes
should be built to serve only cyclists, which would make it much faster to travel with bicycles. Therefore, the number of people who travel by bicycle might be increased.
In conclusion, there are some reasons why people less choose bicycles than other types of transports and some measures could be taken to solve this problem.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Should
...s or metros. Additionally, more lanes should be built to serve only cyclists, which ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1247.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21757322176 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76482620267 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585774058577 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.0530780454 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.916666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9166666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.91666666667 7.06120827912 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162996339471 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606195012606 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0880384798489 0.0667982634062 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0937292982636 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0735118126304 0.056905535591 129% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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